(135) Revelation (Silssa 1983 - 99) Poem by premji premji

(135) Revelation (Silssa 1983 - 99)

Rating: 2.9


I want to end up this journey
It is only having twists from its usual paths
Somebody is pulling me, saying:
Come,
Come out from this dreaded path……
You can’t bear all this…
You are not supposed to bear every thorn…
Only some you have to…
Follow my path……
Follow it…..
But, it is not easy to follow…
You have to suffer a little pain…
You have to be selfish…
You must make others fall in sorrow…
If you are ready, please come fast…
The voice stopped….

Silssa (1983 – 1999)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 27 June 2009

Sad to read. She is in my memories now. I will include her in my daily prayers.

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Pandian Angelina 26 June 2009

Silssa - unselfish, loving and a brave girl - Prem your sister belongs to my thoughts and memories - a part of me which pains will always remember her when remembering my brother. Leena

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Ritty Patnaik 26 June 2009

i have always been afraid of dieing, this poem of a teenager gives me strength to face lifes fall.she was a brave soul.

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Thufail Ahmed 26 June 2009

What that little girl must have gone through. She was a brave little angel indeed.

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Nooruddeen Mm 26 June 2009

Words of a little girl who sees the cruel face of the ‘End’ was sorry to make sorrow others…. Despite her own pain and sorrow while ‘Leaving’ Really sorry to read, Premji, we are with you and your dear and near We include her in our prayers.

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Kesav Easwaran 30 June 2009

The readiness the maturity the acceptance in those lines...having known now the tragedy behind i could understand the difference between the real heartfelt words and imaginary poem writing...may her marvellous soul rest in peace forever...10

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Rani Turton 30 June 2009

Very tragic, the pain of this short life, may she always be remembered through her sensitivity and poetry.

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Gargi Saha 28 June 2009

vERY CRUEL FATE FACED AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE. May her soul reat in peace! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 28 June 2009

Every lines touched your reader's heart, quenched their soul and shed a tear drop...The hardest words to bear are the words of a dying person..................Thanks for sharing these crafts with us!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 June 2009

her poems r filled of pains....she was just in a budding stage...God's too rude! !

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