In suspended animation of Now
Why can't I just BE?
With no baggage of the past
And no worry for the future
With nothing to pursue
And nothing to prove
BUT FOR THE JOY OF NOW!
I do not wish to become anything
I just wish to BE
To experience the magic of being alive,
To see the unfolding wonder
of the phenomenon called LIFE,
To admire life's variety
in all its facets.
To explore, to feel, to share the divinity within'
which ties us all in a single thread of consciousness.
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Your poem carries a deep message. You are really a serious poet.
This is what usually Man has forgotten almost...TO BE... a GOOD READ!
religiously written with a self always trodding within. indeed a good penning. pl. read my poems and offer comments if you can.
To be alive, exalting and enjoying the life seems enough to so many wise people. Beautiful write.
If for one such moment you can consciously be Unburdened by the past or by futures fear decree Free you will be in spirit and soul indeed And as a Buddha a new life lead Moment to moment living life intensely And that is what God initially ordained us to be............. Very good work and Madam, I invite you to visit my page and offer your esteemed comments
An enjoyable piece; BEING versus DOING, it's part of the human condition we all must endure, DO, BE, DO, BE, DO - perhaps Frank SInatra had it right all along; loved the concept of your poem. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
Great write. Enjoyed the feelings of 2Be. I invite you to visit my page Anita JI.
Fantastic write. yes, to explore, to feel to share the divine within.....single thread of consciousness..Good message..Enjoyed reading it.
drop the baggage of the past and don't worry about the future is the simple way to live. Let the future take care of itself. great thoughts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a yearning for complete freedom and complete surrender too. Lovely