Even if the sky will turn to gray
Even if the day will be hazy
Even if the sun won't kiss the sea
Still the day will be an Angie Day
Celebrate like a dove escaped from the cage
'Cause one more year is added to your age
Stretch your arms and tell them you're happy
'Cause God's bounty is on your way
25th candle is goin' to be blown
Make a wish not only for your own
Whisper it to Him and make it a prayer
Don't stop 'til you find His answer
Sing a song and shout your praise
Touch His heart and dwell in His place
Make Him smile in your own special way
And let Him be the one to make your day
For you I have only one wish
Hope your age will increase
'Cause you have more people to bless
Soon the true happiness will cover your face
Dedicated to Angie Lee of Rowland heights, L.A.
Even if the sun won't kiss the sea (I like this line a lot.) I like the thoughts you convey in this poem. The metaphors add color and meaning to what you want to say.
Angie Lee is a lucky person. You expressed a fine sentiment and appreciation for her. Thanks Jimmer
you have a gift. thanks for sharing. and those aren't empty words of praise- i really enjoy your writing.
Written with the ink of possitivity and celebration.
What a novel and elaborate way to wish somebody a happy birthday. Good write.
i like the way u rhyme this poem word to word leads to a magic poem ahhh the heart of a poet! a 10 +10=20!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
some people think that age is bad that no one wants to get o0lder But you show that age can be a good thing for a person everyone that thinks that they should stay young for ever needs to read this and the people that want to be older remember you will regreat it this is one great poem that would change the thoughts and way that people think about their life and the way that they think about it. It proves that no matter the age you can make a difference.. and make someone feel better.. Thank you for write in this fine poem so that people can read it and maybe just maybe can get a understanding that no matter the age things will not change... so i just wanted to say that your poems are great and no matter what others tell you, you should keep on write in.. You have changed my thoughts in the point that i always wanted to get older fast and how i think that i just want to take life a little slower....