29 June Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

29 June

Rating: 4.9


leaf skeletons
stems hollow
tiny veins, rigid
support air
where once lay
fragrant memory

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 August 2006

Fourteen words that profoundly images, and depicts the Efflorescent Death... Fine Penning, Eila''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Nimal Dunuhinga 06 August 2006

Nothing is certain poem says.................Exceptional! Eila.

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Such palpable tangible poetic images

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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

Wow! This is really incredible...

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Molaire Jules 29 June 2007

That is also my mom's birthday. ''Great write! ''

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***** ********* 08 August 2006

This sounds like a great loss Eila, expressed in a beautifully formed poem. I don't know what happened on that date but I feel your pain. Tai

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Duncan Wyllie 08 August 2006

So much said in so few words, no failed poet lives here! ! ! Love duncan X

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