A Bare Truth Poem by Romeo Della Valle
A Bare Truth
I am in the present perfect
Where I have always been,
Finally reaching
Something of my own
Which makes tomorrow
A day worth following...
As I rise with the orange glow
Of an enterprising ideal
That is too ardent
And possessive to let go...
I may be unknown and alone,
But the real one is ready
Apart from here
And has become part of the world
I am striving for...
Separating the many
Halves of me
And sorting them
Into the infinite good or bad
I am most likely to succeed...
The Cause is the ideal,
The ideal is the principle
And the tempter's key
Which unlocks or fastens
The door of immortality...
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nice work...especially I am unknown and alone, The real one is yet Already apart from here And is part of the world I am striving for... awesome
I really like it! Abstract enough to be very creative, but not so much so that I'm left saying... Huh? ? ? Awesomeness :)
i like the first line very much i smiled it is like a grammar lesson but it is more than that you are witty and playful with words coming up with poems worth the time
It's a lovely depiction of the life as what you painted with pen & paper. A creative way to look at.......I am in the present perfect.............
nice write its very touching its very true... read it 3 times
nice work.........a good insightful poem thumbs up keep writing
I am in the present perfect. Which unlocks or fastens, the door of immortality.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 8:26:36 AM # 1.0.0
This is an excellent poem. You are very creative and your words are deep with meaning.