A Beating Song By A Drummer And His Wife Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Beating Song By A Drummer And His Wife

Rating: 4.4


She- 'I will not sing a song
For you are always wrong
Beating me and my gong
With a stick for so long
For singing the same song'

He- 'I will not sing a song
For you are always wrong
Beating me and my gong
For singing the same song
With the same stick so long'

Monday, April 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,nonsense,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 30 April 2018

A unique style of writing, thanks for sharing.

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An interesting, fun filled song that sounds like folk music. I loved the rhythm. I loved the humour. I loved your cute poem, dear Indira Ma'm. :) ...10

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samanyan 08 May 2018

lovely mam a folk song

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What a funny write. So entertaining. Loved it. Repetition induces the mind to sing. Thanks for sharing, Indira. Stay blessed!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 May 2018

I will not sing asong For you are always wrong Beating me and my gong For singing the same song With the same stick so long.........amusing expression with a new pattern. Enjoyed with thanks.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 May 2018

'A Beating song by Adrummer's Wife' carries fun....Beating me and my gong/For singing the same song (stereotypical?) ....Liked the humor! Thanks dear madam for sharing! .........10...Stay always blessed...(Dillip)

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