the morning is so beautiful..friend
wake up and see it yourself
the young dawns magic..nothing seems old
as the new day unfolds
wake up and see for yourself...friend
if i shake you to wake you
you wake up with a shock in mind
sleep will leave its dread behind
the morning is so beautiful...
wake up and see for yourself....friend
it's not just about dawn
I wake up everyday, fresh and free from the troubles of the previous day to a new beginning, a new day. Waking up to the lovely sound of those sweet birds is so refreshing and energising. Nice write...............
this is a very inspiring write..and you used beautiful imagery here..the dawn..a positive outlook in life..a hope.. beautiful Sam..
Absolutely great! But unfortunately most of the people miss!
It’s beautiful, really a beautiful poem like a beautiful dawn. Yes! It’s not just about the dawn. Wonderful Samanyan! Wonderful! ! The last clinching line turns the poem up side down and then brings it to an unending state of meaningfulness...10/10. Regards Naseer
No My Friend, you are so right...it is not just about the dawn....so Beautiful. Your Prose is Magic. Thanks also for your kind comments to my own. May your mind stay clear forever to display your True Gifts. Kind Regards. Philip
Like the expression, 'the young dawn's magic'. Very inspiring.
'It's not just about dawn.' Waking up is a celebration of life. Thank you for this.
sandhya pravartatey....uthishto uthishta govinda uthishta garudhwaja......i was reminded of these lines when I read the poem! !
Alas wwe may have to wake them one by one but it matters not for still the dawn awaits us all--- 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
as mourning tore each grave the heart wounded with pain. scented with hope and wonder call the dawning hope of paradise.....such a lovely poem, worthy to be published in all resting place...... a great poem that life is not just a dawn to wait...but a moment of rejoicing with all created form....... thank you for sharing....God bless...10 ++++++