# A Beautiful Dawn Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Beautiful Dawn

Rating: 4.3


the morning is so beautiful..friend
wake up and see it yourself
the young dawns magic..nothing seems old
as the new day unfolds
wake up and see for yourself...friend

if i shake you to wake you
you wake up with a shock in mind
sleep will leave its dread behind
the morning is so beautiful...
wake up and see for yourself....friend

it's not just about dawn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 27 August 2009

as mourning tore each grave the heart wounded with pain. scented with hope and wonder call the dawning hope of paradise.....such a lovely poem, worthy to be published in all resting place...... a great poem that life is not just a dawn to wait...but a moment of rejoicing with all created form....... thank you for sharing....God bless...10 ++++++

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Ted M 28 August 2009

I wake up everyday, fresh and free from the troubles of the previous day to a new beginning, a new day. Waking up to the lovely sound of those sweet birds is so refreshing and energising. Nice write...............

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Meggie Gultiano 28 August 2009

this is a very inspiring write..and you used beautiful imagery here..the dawn..a positive outlook in life..a hope.. beautiful Sam..

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Subbaraman N V 30 August 2009

Absolutely great! But unfortunately most of the people miss!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 August 2009

It’s beautiful, really a beautiful poem like a beautiful dawn. Yes! It’s not just about the dawn. Wonderful Samanyan! Wonderful! ! The last clinching line turns the poem up side down and then brings it to an unending state of meaningfulness...10/10. Regards Naseer

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Philip Winchester 24 October 2009

No My Friend, you are so right...it is not just about the dawn....so Beautiful. Your Prose is Magic. Thanks also for your kind comments to my own. May your mind stay clear forever to display your True Gifts. Kind Regards. Philip

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Patti Masterman 21 October 2009

Like the expression, 'the young dawn's magic'. Very inspiring.

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Raymond Rivera 02 October 2009

'It's not just about dawn.' Waking up is a celebration of life. Thank you for this.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 24 September 2009

sandhya pravartatey....uthishto uthishta govinda uthishta garudhwaja......i was reminded of these lines when I read the poem! !

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Patrick A. Martin 15 September 2009

Alas wwe may have to wake them one by one but it matters not for still the dawn awaits us all--- 10

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