# A Beautiful Dawn Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Beautiful Dawn

Rating: 4.3

the morning is so beautiful..friend
wake up and see it yourself
the young dawns magic..nothing seems old
as the new day unfolds
wake up and see for yourself...friend

if i shake you to wake you
you wake up with a shock in mind
sleep will leave its dread behind
the morning is so beautiful...
wake up and see for yourself....friend

it's not just about dawn

Indira Renganathan 15 September 2009

The last line clearly speaks it out....the dawn from the nescience of the inner self..really a matured poem...nice reading

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 15 September 2009

nice poem, especially the line, that you wont shake and wake him, i really hate when someone wakes me up from my sleep...

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Pandian Angelina 02 September 2009

The awakening should be from within Self realisation result of seeking The rise of Gyana its rays To enlighten the soul Which lies asleep! Reminds one of songs of Tagore, The lulling waves of a smooth flowing river, The lotus blossoms and the swaying reeds The song of birds rejoicing in the sky All fall as an unpainted scene As you gently sing to awake my soul! A Suprapatham - A song to gently awake us all! Angel

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Hema Ravi 31 August 2009

Dawn is indeed a heavenly time.......far away from the mad crowd and the stress and pressures of life! Thanks for posting

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Sonya Florentino 30 August 2009

wake up, wake up...to your true awakening....yes, it's not just about the dawn....

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Philip Winchester 24 October 2009

No My Friend, you are so right...it is not just about the dawn....so Beautiful. Your Prose is Magic. Thanks also for your kind comments to my own. May your mind stay clear forever to display your True Gifts. Kind Regards. Philip

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Patti Masterman 21 October 2009

Like the expression, 'the young dawn's magic'. Very inspiring.

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Raymond Rivera 02 October 2009

'It's not just about dawn.' Waking up is a celebration of life. Thank you for this.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 24 September 2009

sandhya pravartatey....uthishto uthishta govinda uthishta garudhwaja......i was reminded of these lines when I read the poem! !

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Patrick A. Martin 15 September 2009

Alas wwe may have to wake them one by one but it matters not for still the dawn awaits us all--- 10

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