# A Creation Goes On Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Creation Goes On

Rating: 3.5


[inspired by poet RONALD PEATS 'A TRUTH]

from the hard seed
to the rough and ruffled root
a scaly stem...
much of use to me
how do we get
an incense flower
and a sweet little fruit
with another seed within it
what an expression of creation
rough soft to rough again
just like a
'rough and tough grandma' of mine
born to my tender daughter again
nature never pretends and....
a creation goes on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

God set it out so... go forth n multiple.. first command.. good poem.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

The enigma of Mother Nature yet to be explained… Enjoyed Sir 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS Science says ‘Whys’ can’t be answered unquestionably [as one answer will give birth to another Why] but ‘How’ it happens can be explained. niv

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Louis Rams 02 January 2010

from a seed, it grew a flower.and from that flower it grew the power to continue to conceive.

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Carol Gall 02 January 2010

beautiful poem great title

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Sandra Martyres 03 January 2010

Interesting poem on the magic of creation....

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Bob Blackwell 10 January 2010

So life continues, yes for ever and ever! ! I really like this poem, simple words to explain all existence. Thank you 10++

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Ramesh T A 09 January 2010

It is 1000 years' crop! It will go on forever and ever! Nothing can change Nature's rule!

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Raj Nandy 06 January 2010

COMMENTING ONLY ON THE TITLE OF THIS POEM, AS I DID FOR THE LAST ONE; I MUST SAY THAT ASTRO PHYSISITS LIKE CARL SAGAN, STEPHEN HAWKINGS & OTHERS HAVE ALL SAID THAT CREATION GOES ON IN THIS DYNAMIC UNIVERSE! EINSTEIN HAD MADE AN ERROR WHEN HE INITIALLY INTRODUCED - A COSMOLOGICAL 'K' CONSTANT, & LATER WITHDREW! This gives an added deeper meaning to your sweet & simple poem! -Raj

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Ency Bearis 06 January 2010

its true....the creation goes on and on....that's the evolution of life in this world...

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Kesav Easwaran 04 January 2010

The seed is the same SLN...it's only remodelling reshaping and 'recreat'ing at the Highest levels...thanks for your good meaningful write...10

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