Jasmine Poems: 99 / 500

A Birth Day Wish*.

Rating: 4.3

oh! wake up my lovely princess,
allow the sun to rise for you,
and sprinkle its golden rays,
with all its effulgence in, bright
golden hue and sparkle! .

let flowers of all hues and colors,
size, shape, layers and fragrance,
jasmine, rose, lilies, lotus, dahlia,
iris, tulips and daffodils vie each
other to decorate your lovely
hair in plates, layers and multi
layers, and let the sheen in your
eyes brighten up the beauty of
the jewels and silks you wear
and let the fragrance of lowers
enhance your mood fly high and
spread joy and happiness for
you, family and friends and let
me hold your hands and wish
a happy and joyful birthday! .
-o0o-

Friday, September 18, 2009
Jasmine Poems: 99 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Sonal Chhaya 26 September 2009

Beautiful birthday wish..............Good poem

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a beautiful poem..best gift on a birthday..

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Obinna Eruchie 23 September 2009

Flowery with beautiful imagery.

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Eyan Desir 27 September 2009

Good write The flow wasnt the best But good for a 10

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This poem is enchanting and so beautifully picturesque. All the flowers bring such magic into it, and your little princess sounds adorable. 10 love Karin

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Lovley poem, , , .amaazing write and a manificient poem

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Lady Grace 11 June 2010

how r u surya? ....add more....ur poems are nice...

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Iron Panda 23™ 28 April 2010

soooo awesomely beautiful! ! !

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Jessica Fay Harding 21 April 2010

A beautiful composition of vivid imagery to express what would have otherwise been a cliched versification. Well done Surya.

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Raj Nandy 01 April 2010

A BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY WISH EXPRESSED IN VERSE! -Raj

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