poet Kranthi Pothineni

Kranthi Pothineni

A Bride

I am living with smile
Along with lot of bail
And like a small child
In a world of care
With my old birth pair

Its my home for age
I played in that cage
With a lot of gage
Also made me a sage
So its not just a page

It gave me a name
It showed me a aim
Also thought me a game
That made me a dame
Then my marriage came

And gave me new name
Showed me a new aim
Changed the rules of game
Life is no longer same
My past life looks tame

New life act like a sage
My old life is not page
Don't tear it with rage
Read it carefully for age
Its a wish of a bride

Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2009

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  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/12/2014 9:58:00 AM)

    very good poem for recitation as well.

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/23/2009 12:12:00 AM)

    wish all your aims will come true....well expressed indeed..i like the flow of your words..very moving 10++

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (4/26/2009 1:51:00 AM)

    starting a dual life...transition to the latter stage will happen only slowly...meaningful write, Kranthi...10

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (3/24/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    Interestingly a rhyming wish....good poem10

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (3/21/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    full of briliancy of rhymes! I love it. keep writing!

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  • Amy Douglass (Fifita) (3/14/2009 3:46:00 PM)

    Nice write. I liked it.

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  • Anthony Edmond JohnAnthony Edmond John (3/10/2009 6:58:00 AM)

    Kranthi ur lines are melodious wth ryhmes..and I love the mention of the sage. cheers. The Sage

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  • Stephanie Souter (3/10/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    verry verry nicely corected. i like this poem so much more.
    wonderful job

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  • Catrina Heart (3/9/2009 3:48:00 AM)

    A bride always wish for a happy and healthy life...past is a past and we are there to live anew with your lucky bride....10+++++++

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