A Candle In Wind Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Candle In Wind

Rating: 4.5

Storm is at the bay
Light is going away
Darkness filled in way
Heart is empty to pay
The last lit of its ray

In its pursuit of gay
Year passed like day
With no words to say
Closed eyes to pray
For the smell of clay

Rain is going to spray
To wet time in gray
Sure for long to stay
With nothing left to slay
Music of pathos on play

There will be no hay
Nor someone’s prey
Only memories of may
And the words of nay
To be part of the lay

Wind left me to stray
With a empty tray
But light said ay
Don’t ever get dismay
Life is not just today

Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

..........AY rhymes, well structured. A Candle In The Wind like the song says...fine poetic piece...10+++

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Pink Butterfly ... 26 June 2009

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! You're the best rhymer ever! I can't imagine making a poem like this! It's one of a kind and it's really cute!

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Surya . 26 June 2009

vow! really inspiring. rhyming too. voted10 surya

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premji premji 26 June 2009

what a rhyming! from where did you get all these y's? lovely write............

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nice rhymes...very poetic

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Hope and light is interconnected and poem also.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

As long as there is LIGHT. there is hope. Light is hope.

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Indira Renganathan 07 July 2009

A poem with perfect rhyming....10+++

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

nice kranthi the tongue literraly runs with the rhyme and poem superb write cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 27 June 2009

Always hope of tomorrow

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