**a Cheerful Poem For Whom Will Be Caught..For The Big Rat Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
**a Cheerful Poem For Whom Will Be Caught..For The Big Rat
note: iam still under the attack of the Rats WHOM THANKFULLY push my poems to be advanced in top 500.....and by the way..they come to the trap by themselves...many have been caught....26/9/09...
I close my windows, my doors and for you a trap I left in WHICH you will be caught,
...for my poems which have been degraded to 2 and to 7. eight.
. put for you some pieces of poisonous meet, little biscuit..and on A golden plate some sticky cheese and broken bone
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the great, fruitful trees with hard stones always will be thrown by whom has ugly trait...
will be in wait if you dare to give THEN give me that low rate...and gaze in my eyes and ventilate and tell why all this hate and all that thorn
lol..this is a mini poem which i will update...
FOR WHOM CONTINUE TO GIVE ME 1/10..THEY ARE MORE THAN ONE RAT...
hi friends..iam still facing trouble in commenting..what i face is different than any one of you, i hope you will look around and seee what happened to my poems..my best poems were visited one by one by a group of people and the poem which wasrated 10/10 44 times decreased suddenly to 7.8 or 8.3 what does that mean if you are good in calculation..it is not done by just one but by many and this is not a healthy situation here..
i aplogize..i made this poem as a funn and no i will not makemy self do not see.every body has to know what is going on..just please try to see more than popularity and rating..try to know and see that there is thefting and not poetry and this has to be raised to ph staff may be they can change little of this ugly attitudes of some...............alright i said i will check the rating before i put this and it happened they are here and i will discover them and say their name on puplic...........thanks
you are just wonderful girl! i love your work. please keep it up and careless of what people say. you are great lol!
when the fruit is ripe it is beaten by many; if it is raw nobody bothers to even look at it since you are growing many may attack; pl do not get disheartened...surge ahead; you will have a glorious future God Bless You
Dear TaMaRa, your creativity is based on your work, what do you care what some narrowed minded people think, let the music plays, this is a big wold, you got my honest respect, I have many poems with not rating or comments, but that does not stop me from writing more, I simply keep writing, somebody will like it..Love and Peace, Romeo(Thanks for your valuable comments on my poems, I really appreciate, f those ratings, it is just a manipulating tool, Love and Peace, Romeo
Good! ! ! you caught the dirty rats.I enjoyed your poem.
Do not worry about it dear.. You said..lol..the dirty rats.. Your cheese so dear they wast.. Hidding in the sand... i do.. and there it is..i wait.. like you..for crumbs to come.. my way from you...iip...so smile.. :)
All that really matters in the end is that you write beautiful poetry.
very much realistic approach and the way you wrote this piece is enough interesting heart feeling type..well done and hope you wil write more and more..10/10
I like your art. Good art indeed. I love ready ur fine art keep it up. 10+++
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:33:10 PM # 1.0.0
friend, some people aren't ready for some style. you're very creative and I liked this one so much...