That little cottage by the sea,
Where roses grow so eagerly,
That little place I long to live,
That special place,
So much to give.
It's in my dreams,
If only for real,
To satisfy the hope I feel,
That maybe one day,
Those dreams come true,
That special place,
I long for you.
That dream of mine,
I can't let go,
Maybe one day?
Maybe so?
Jayne Louise Davies
I love the repetition of 'may be'. It creates a catchy rhythm.
I can relate to the feelings. I'd love to have a cottage by the sea. So much peace and serenity flow in these words. Ma
Yes, your dreams are eternally valuable and can't let it go. Beautiful poem, charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the first four lines. Jayne, thank you for sharing.
Also, it would be an attractive place for current friends to come visit you!
Having a little place close to the ocean is a dream worth holding onto and a place to reminisce of good times with special people.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A special, dream place! Surely, if you wish it, it will be yours. Marvellous poem Jayne....10