That little cottage by the sea,
Where roses grow so eagerly,
That little place I long to live,
That special place,
So much to give.
It's in my dreams,
If only for real,
To satisfy the hope I feel,
That maybe one day,
Those dreams come true,
That special place,
I long for you.
That dream of mine,
I can't let go,
Maybe one day?
Maybe so?
Jayne Louise Davies
I can relate to the feelings. I'd love to have a cottage by the sea. So much peace and serenity flow in these words. Ma
I love the repetition of 'may be'. It creates a catchy rhythm.
A special, dream place! Surely, if you wish it, it will be yours. Marvellous poem Jayne....10
Also, it would be an attractive place for current friends to come visit you!
Having a little place close to the ocean is a dream worth holding onto and a place to reminisce of good times with special people.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, your dreams are eternally valuable and can't let it go. Beautiful poem, charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the first four lines. Jayne, thank you for sharing.