A Cottage By The Sea Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Cottage By The Sea

Rating: 5.0

That little cottage by the sea,
Where roses grow so eagerly,
That little place I long to live,
That special place,
So much to give.
It's in my dreams,
If only for real,
To satisfy the hope I feel,
That maybe one day,
Those dreams come true,
That special place,
I long for you.
That dream of mine,
I can't let go,
Maybe one day?
Maybe so?

Jayne Louise Davies

Irfanulla Shariff 22 September 2022

Yes, your dreams are eternally valuable and can't let it go. Beautiful poem, charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the first four lines. Jayne, thank you for sharing.

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Ruta Mohapatra 24 September 2022

I hope your dream will come true one day...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 September 2022

This is my secret dream

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 September 2022

A special, dream place! Surely, if you wish it, it will be yours. Marvellous poem Jayne....10

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Nosheen Irfan 24 September 2022

I love the repetition of 'may be'. It creates a catchy rhythm.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 September 2022

I can relate to the feelings. I'd love to have a cottage by the sea. So much peace and serenity flow in these words. Ma

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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