Aday Futile Poem by Bharati Nayak

Aday Futile

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It was a day, futile
As it was without poetry
As so many moments of life
Went without record
The train of thought vanished.

Emptiness filled me
Downing my spirit
My wings got tired
It felt as if
A favourite photo
Got lost
Never to be retrieved.

The story was lost by some virus
But I am not without hope
Who knows,
It may flash again
In a new light.

Saturday, October 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,life,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 19 October 2019

An inspirational account embedded in positive approach and hope.

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Bharati Nayak 20 October 2019

Hearty thanks and gratitude Ratnakar Mandlik Sir for coming to read my poem and your appreciation.Nice to see you on my page after a long time.

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Kostas Lagos 21 October 2019

It will come back... great poem

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Bharati Nayak 21 October 2019

Thank you Kostas Lagos for your encouraging comment.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2019

Hi Bharati, When I have nothing to write, I just reading, M AY be Tagore, Neruda, Shakespeare, Shelley or Keats. On PoemHunter. Or I just go to my study and pick any book... maybe Wordsworth, Yeats, Vyloppilly, Chullikkad, Krishna Waaier, G Sankara Kurup or AASAN... And there is poetry all around me.. Wonderfully written..

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A feeling of loss is painful. I too have the same experience. Searching the lost piece of poem I had spent days. It's life.

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Rajnish Manga 23 July 2020

Virus is a part of our life. You never knew at that time that a bigger virus was round the corner to become a pandemic and to take a heavy toll of human lives. Thanks a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

Moments of life! ! Memories, Flashes of the past. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

ur poetry is beauty to read so was or is mine but PH makes errors a day joined like they were twins

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2019

Earlier, I read the title as printed by PH as Aday, and thought no, I don't know this language. Today I read it correctly and read the poem. Yes, the feelings are felt when when something that you wrote get lost. It often does to me when you've not saved it and the power goes off suddenly. Well writ.

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