A Diabolic Act, Rape Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

A Diabolic Act, Rape

Rating: 2.8

A diabolic feeling for the flesh,
Arouses in the realm of thought,
A fire that reduces wisdom to ashes,
For the pleasure of moments,
Decades are ruined.

Stan Petrovich 29 June 2011

I loved this poem not so much for its thematic reference but for its concise targeting of a visious tendency in so many criminals in our midst. Excellent!

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Paul Josef B. 30 June 2011

I was captivated by the third line in your poem-a fire that consumes all discernment.

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Juan Olivarez 30 June 2011

A violent act not worthy of a human being, not even the animals rape. It is truly diabolic. Great wisdom my friend.

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A condition of a depraved mind, inocence is crushed. A fine write, and a sad truth, written with the pen of wisdom

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Antonio Liao 06 July 2011

A laughter of the Devil, the dying soul victory, yet a personal satisfaction endanger Salvation to eternity...bewares..... point of departure, a wonderful poem for reflection...God bless...a star and 10+++

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Malaya Roses 03 July 2011

Self-restraint could unleash our beast from roaming free.... Akmal... your words are more than expression...Thanks for sharing.

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Patti Masterman 02 July 2011

Yes I am sure all rapes must begin diabolically. Men and women only use each other to their own ends and the idea of love becomes distorted.

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Rasheed Dawodu 01 July 2011

This is a wonderful work. Only self constraint can save one from this diabolic feeling.

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Hribhu Dey 01 July 2011

another fabulous work Dear. A 10 Plz read my MYSTIC BIRD.thanks

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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