(A general discussion on "The Genesis" by Mahtab Bangalee and "Only Peace And Eternal Life On Earth" by Sylvia Frances Chan)
Well
Thanks a lot
Your every comment is the juice for knowledge
Yes; I'm here to read
Sometimes I write
for knowing myself;
I do not write a note on my writings
Cause- I know nothing about me
But yes; I know, every poetic line gives me
a lot of thinking;
Reading the same poetic expression at different time
give me a different taste on inside and insight of these writings;
Well
You, the Icon for me
as literary essence;
About my writings
you've expressed
the finest thought
But; I was in another way!
Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit
In Heaven, Satan enticed both of them
It's a creed that- none and nothing can move a little bit without permission of God!
If this creed is true; then Adam, Eve, Satan, and their all activities were allowed in the knowledge of God!
Whatever, Adam and Eve's eating the forbidden fruit was mercy for us!
Because- if both of them did not eat the fruits then God would not create this universe, solar system, happy, sorrow, peace, pain…..etc!
Both of them ate the fruits and opened the endless path of cosmic life
And they emancipated us from robotic angel life!
(Note: Angel is a robotic machine! Angel (neuter gender!) has no sense of happiness, sorrow, peace, pain…..etc!)
So thanks to Adam, Eve, Satan
Cause- they opened for us an endless path of cosmic life!
Thanks to you O' Poetess Sylvia Frances Chan
Thanks to your greatness
Thanks to your every comment
Thanks to your knowledge
Thanks to your ink of wisdom
Wish you an eternal ubiquitous planet for your ink of knowledge
-April 11,2019, Chattogram
Thanks to you O' Poetess Sylvia Frances Chan Thanks to your greatness your every comment your knowledge ink of wisdom Wish you an eternal ubiquitous? planet for your' ink' man's ink woman's juices pl maintain a lovely poetic parlance O POET MB of BD of knowledge sonarly lovely poetry improving daily pick up one of mine similarly ALSO teach me MB
But yes; I know, every poetic line give me a lot of thinking; Reading the same poetic expression every time give me a different taste on inside and insight of these writings; beautiful praise and thanksgiving to dear poetess.. Sylvia Frances Chan
" Satan enticed both of them" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An intelligent comment on a nice poem by Sylvia Frances Chan, in fact it is a poetic critical appreciation.