I'm the angel sent to protect you.
Watching your life through closed eyes,
I watch and observe.
Such a delicate creature of beauty,
My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing,
Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity,
My heart's exploding with the thought of you,
So painful; love hurts,
Watching my hidden desire from a far,
Never together only distanced by love.
Crim, you wana bring tears to other children's eyes? ..this is a great piece of art my fellow poet and many of us can relate to it....WOW!
i love this, crim! yeah, that's your new nickname...'crim'. :) no but seriously, i'm very inspired by this, it's beautiful, just like you, except you're just plain gorgeous.... XD
God has His ways of testing love by keeping two apart, making it divine with distance bringing them together in heaven. Simply loved reading.
An angel sent to protect falls in love. What a complication! But that's what love is - a complication - perhaps sexual expression is a simplication, a reductionof that complication to a point of satisfaction. But in this case that is not possible so the heart and mind are in acute conflict. The mind must agree with the heart eventually or vice versa but the heightened existence this leadsd to is stunning. Loin d'amour is the titlem, of an opera the MET presented thismseason, in other words Love from Afar. Your poem exactly!
Eternity is nye, neither here nor there, ours eyes defy what once was there. Longing is sweet, seperation makes and breaks Time is our enemy, and with your life as meaning That kind of true love is simply demeaning Fuck yeh, good luck to ya
My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing, Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity, My heart's exploding with the thought of you, love hurts. we all go through such experiences which make us all mature. thank you. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Passionate, true and plainly wondrous writing. It's a fine piece of art.