Elena Sandu

A Dream? .. - Poem by Elena Sandu

Ten thousand times a day
To be gently touched
Lost smiles of mine
Searched, found, and made
To bloom again
Ten thousand times a day
With sweetest kisses to be marked
Ten thousand times a day
By one with sweetest soul
Of earth, that's you
My treasured man.
Then shall sit back
And have a rest
No need for measure
I'm giving back to you no less
Then ten thousand times a day
Sit tight and smile
delighted with my sweetest treat:
My love my heart my soul
All yours...
Please hug me!
Cling tight on me:
The wood's old castle
I am now and you became
My Ivy.....

Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Comments about A Dream? .. by Elena Sandu

  • (8/7/2016 10:50:00 AM)

    Great image binds the poem with a fine climax.
    Good technique.
    Tom Billsborough
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  • Anthony Burkett (1/21/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    capturing a moment of desire... fleeting... the true essence of desire... my complements dear poet! (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2011 3:52:00 AM)

    Fine blend of love and devotion is displayed through out very gently. The man must be really very proud and secured with such a lovely hearted wife. My ten thousand times thanks for sharing such a powerful, eternal lovely poem. I give full 10. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2010 1:01:00 AM)

    No need for measure’

    'In romance measure
    Is but slasher
    Pales blusher
    Uh-ing usher’ ~ niv …excellent poetry finest feeling … thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • Moonbee Canady (7/22/2010 9:44:00 AM)

    Oh, This is a Jewel of a Write... such beautiful thoughts you have must come 10,000 Times A Day (smile) ... It flowed like a fantastic landscape... I enjoyed reading it throughout, especially the castle wall and clinging ivy part... ingenious! ... MoonBee (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2010 5:44:00 AM)

    That's sweet and inspiring...be it a dream or reality...captivating words...10 (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (4/28/2010 8:47:00 AM)

    Hi Elena - welcome to Poemhunter - we are lovely people who share our love through our poetry. Dream Love is perfect Angel because we can cross all the boundaries of space and time and just - ENJOY. We all need to be touched and kissed Elena to make us bloom again. Love is always the sharing of our 'sweetest treats' and in Dream Love we can give ourselves completely every time - even ten thousand times! ! ! . Tight hugs are always on the menu. The similie of you as the castle being 'climbed up' by the ivy - as your lover is beautiful. Thanks for caring - thanks for sharing - Love through Poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

  • Abnish Singh Chauahan (4/24/2010 4:59:00 AM)

    an interesting poem/ full of emotions/ well written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 24, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, April 16, 2018

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