You are the moon in the sky
and i am a far away star from you
you can give me light and make me bright
but i have nothing to offer you
would that be ok with you?
October 22,2008
How sweet...you can as well say a hi...sweet poem10+++++++
a nice little poem to read. always remember that everyone has something to offer. you can pray for some one's kindness. can't you? ? ?
You can offer a lot Hataw Muhamad, words which are brighter than stars and moon. Nice little poem. Keep on writing!
I still wonder what makes a poet.. this clarified it a little bit for me.. it is the ability to look a a blank sheet of paper and see words... or to take a handful of soil and it in see worlds.. thats what you did... ciao Leslie
No words describe you words but i want to say i love your words Nice Nice words
this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]
this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a starry question...no; an offer a sweet bargain! ...10