A Fickle Mistress Poem by Dee Daffodil

A Fickle Mistress

Rating: 5.0


Poetry...
She lures us in,
As if with her beguiling grin
She captures hearts inclined to sin

Poetry...
That lady fair
Displays a most defiant glare
When we attempt to leave her lair

Poetry...
Makes us drunk with glee
But, she will never set us free
From that which we desire, but can never be

Poetry...
Entices all
With her soul she does call
To those that she may soon enthral

Poetry...
That fickle mistress
Causes hearts and souls distress
Because she fills that need...that humans do possess

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellently expressed and tremendously true.

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Gurpreet S. 19 November 2008

very well written work.. im already your fan! my 10!

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Pamela Lutwyche 11 October 2008

Hey, Dee this poetry lark gets to me I wish I could stop. Must be like a drug But, I love writing what I do I love finding people, like you That makes sense and makes me smile I’m glad I found this site I was just surfing the internet One cold and dark night Then I came across this site And I must admit it has given me A good few laughs He he he

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Kris Smith 23 September 2008

Poetry is the muse that storms the mind and pulls the heart of the sentient soul never letting go 10 Chris

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Nia Riz 19 September 2008

aaah.... av ery good poem....and a good way of describing poetry. keep on wiritng as i can see that you alredy wrote 185 poems. love, Nia

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Karen LaRose 22 October 2009

I don't know how to put into words all that I want to say, but I absolutely love this piece

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Eyan Desir 16 February 2009

well, written plus well express..lol great job

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James B. Earley 10 February 2009

Excellent composition! Please read 'Definition Of Poet.'

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Russel Sprouts 04 February 2009

A wonderfully true and beautiful poem Dee. A well-deserved ten for sure. Keep em coming!

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Carl Harris 04 February 2009

No often does a poet write so accurately of Erato, that muse of poetry, which so affects the soul of every poet around the world, Dee. Your fine poem is beautifully written and expressed, and written in a fairly terse style that is quite reader friendly. You have tied these related verses together quite wonderfully. Carl.

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