A Flowerbed! Poem by Savita Tyagi

A Flowerbed!

Rating: 5.0


An abandoned spiderweb
Survived the onslaught of
Winter ice and snow.

The spring came and filled
The spider web with tiny flowers
Shredded from the bush above.

A tiny insect now enjoys
The comfort of a soft white bed!
A tantalizing feast for eyes!

Monday, July 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 12 July 2017

Beautiful....! I have watched this sight and wondered if the shining droplets are gems studded on a gossamer fabric!

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Savita Tyagi 13 July 2017

Thank you so much. Your poetic comment add so much to it.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 July 2017

A beautiful poem on nature's added beauty in the springs.

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Savita Tyagi 13 July 2017

Thank you Akhtar Ji. So good to hear from you.

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

A tantalizing feast for eyes…and may be for the spider! !

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Wonders happen even where they are not expected!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

Beautiful little poem, very meticulous observation so elegantly crafted dear madam

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Beach Girl 02 August 2017

What a delightful observation. Special hidden places in nature are so precious and your poem is too.

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Savita Tyagi 02 August 2017

Thank you Beach Girl for reading the poem. So good to hear from you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 July 2017

Beautiful observation. The poem feels like three connected haikus.

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