A Game Of Ping Pong Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Game Of Ping Pong

Rating: 4.8

In a game of Ping Pong, it's always a thrill
to watch the little ball go back and forth, until
one player misses and it hits the ground
the other shouts, 'I won that round! '.

But what about Ping, the one who's first to serve
does anyone really pay attention to her nerve?
she stands there ready, with paddle in hand
but all eyes are on Pong, the one in demand.

Ping in Pong, such a funny little rhyme
but let's give Ping her moment to shine
for without her, there'd be no game
no back and forth, no fame to claim.

She serves the ball with all her might
but Pong's reflexes are out of sight
he hits it back with a fierce swing
and Ping runs to catch it, like a puppet on a string.

They go back and forth, the crowd in awe
but Ping can't seem to catch the ball
It bounces off the table, then her head
and suddenly, Ping is lying in bed.

Pong wins the game, but at what cost?
for Ping's head is now completely lost
she's replaced it with a giant saucepan
and now her name is Ping-Pan, the Ping Pong champ.

Wednesday, March 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 March 2024

Is there a story behind this story? ? Is there these days a real 'table tennis' player named Pong and another named Ping? ? Are they (if they exist) Chinese, Japanese, 'American', or...? ?

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Gordon Walter 18 March 2024

I think you are tring to read between the lines. Keep guessing MAN.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2024

Very interesting poem on the small ball Ping-Pong. So nicely crafted. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2024

Amazingly humorous. Very entertaining. A great read!

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Bri Edwards 13 March 2024

(cont.) ...and 'pong' equates to the sound of the bounce on the table.' I like (a lot) the rhyming, but I applaud Asim for not 'forcing' a rhyme for his last 2 lines. bri : )

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Gordon Walter 18 March 2024

Enjoyed the humour.

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David Wood 15 March 2024

I feel sorry for the ball it gets battery every time....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 15 March 2024

Interesting piece. Humour, yes. Your words go beyond the game. Touches life

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 March 2024

Bravo My friend Asim Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 14 March 2024

Excellent representation.... thank u... friend....

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