A Good Line Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Good Line

Rating: 4.9


A good line in a poem
is not there when-
I start with a poem.
A good line in a poem-
would be born-
to its previous line-
just when i write it down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 27 January 2009

Short and sweet reflecting reality! Congrats!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 January 2009

It is a new concept for me to learn

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Sankar Sarkar 22 January 2009

FINE AND PRFOUND THEME CO EXISTING IN THIS PIECE, THANKS...........

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 January 2009

A good line in a poem is a line behind the line.

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Meggie Gultiano 17 January 2009

this is cute and a very nice piece, Sam.

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Naidz Ladia 02 April 2009

i agree on this statement of yours...you are absolutely right..

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

A very plain statement, and one I agree with. GW62

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Ency Bearis 01 April 2009

a great concept to start with...

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Sandra Fowler 01 March 2009

The good lines are the lines that create themselves. Very profound thoughts. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 January 2009

I love lines when they are still in the making.10

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