A Good Line Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Good Line

Rating: 4.9


A good line in a poem
is not there when-
I start with a poem.
A good line in a poem-
would be born-
to its previous line-
just when i write it down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Deep in its simplicity yet profound in its simplicity. The second line is always most important because it is not how you begin but how you end.10/10

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Stephanie Fiddy 18 December 2008

wow. Very interesting concept. Awesome! :)

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Ruchita Sharma 25 December 2008

i totally agree wit howard.... its might appear simple...but requires lot of talent

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 January 2009

short write yet very interesting.. mind's stirring lines..with great concept..... brilliant thoughts....GOOD LINES ++++10 for this.....

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

A good line is as spontaneous a bolt of lightning...a serendipitous moment. write on Samanyan.

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Naidz Ladia 02 April 2009

i agree on this statement of yours...you are absolutely right..

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

A very plain statement, and one I agree with. GW62

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Ency Bearis 01 April 2009

a great concept to start with...

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Sandra Fowler 01 March 2009

The good lines are the lines that create themselves. Very profound thoughts. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 January 2009

I love lines when they are still in the making.10

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