A Great Fall In A Dream Poem by Rajendran Muthiah

A Great Fall In A Dream

Rating: 5.0

She swept me up to the dreamy sky.
Riffs of her music filled my heart.
In her close embrace, I swooned.
Hugged me and kissed me.
I was born again.
Her eyes glinted.
I fell down.

Pankajam K 21 March 2012

short and sweet. Liked it.

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Aana Samsohang 24 March 2012

its..sweet I likesss =)

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James William 03 December 2012

wow.... no words to describe this poem........

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Roseann Shawiak 28 May 2014

Yes, Rajendran, love is totally beautiful until it dies and leaves one wounded. Short poignant poem. It touches the compassion within me. Thank you for sharing this poem. Thank you also for your comment on my poem: Inner Prison. It is very much appreciated. RoseAnn

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Rajnish Manga 20 September 2015

Love is what makes us rich internally and spiritually but we turn into a pauper the moment this element of love goes amiss in our lives, for whatever reason. This small poem, though, begins on a high but ends on a poignant note. Thanks.

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

A lovelorn peach! nice 10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2017

Lovely little write dear sir. Enjoyed the subtle poetic expression..10

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Zion Anisius 04 October 2017

a simple yet a beautiful content with so much meaning

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 June 2017

simply beautiful loveable poetry compose more o poet I am ROMANTIC MOSTLY Also reply comments if you please \more will love thee

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Terry Craddock 12 December 2016

'Her eyes glinted. I fell down. Wounded. Peach! ' the skies the limit, sometimes our feathers get burned :)

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Rajendran Muthiah

Rajendran Muthiah

Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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