A Guide Into Heaven Poem by suzan gumush

A Guide Into Heaven

Rating: 4.6


While I'm sitting pretty
Indulging in all luxury
Lavishing in style
My life has never been vile
Only beauty surrounds me
A picturesque view
Those birds do sing
While the angels wear there wings
An echo of laughter
That lasts for ever after
Sitting within an idyllic world
Tis the only world for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beth L Adams 06 January 2008

I love the 'Heavenly' picture you've painted, beautiful and serene! This is a place we all should hope to call our home in the afterlife. Excellent job! Beth

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Ricky Owen 06 January 2008

Brilliant enjoyed it alot great write nice one kindest Regards Ricky

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Mylove Poet 07 January 2008

Hi Suzan, thanks for your lovely poem, I have enjoyed it. Mylovepoet.

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David Kowalczyk 07 January 2008

Excellent job. Thanks, Suzan.

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Cody Moore 10 January 2008

Very nice. You should make a guide book out of this to heaven.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2008

Beautiful poem....The last two lines are very meaningful and uplift the whole poem.

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Lily Law 26 September 2008

a well expressed poem... just lovely..

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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008

Lovely piece, whilst short- it truly speaks to the reader. Good Job :)

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Anthony Edmond John 09 September 2008

I love this lines Cheers... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Kesav Easwaran 09 August 2008

good envious world of you, Suzan! the two lines commencing' those birds' are richly poetic...10/10 come to my in box...

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