suzan gumush

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A Humourous Thought - Poem by suzan gumush

I'll fight the position
That I was pushed into
Those enemies did come fast
Boy! was it all a blast!
A volumne full of a nonsense heap
Tis the thought I didn't want to keep
Turning it all into a comedy of errors
So I gave them all a looking glass mirror
Reflecting their actions and there spew
Made me laugh and look for a new
The nature I was given
Was to laugh and find things funny
Those actions within there faces
Made me fall in all sorts of places
They couldn't connect to my sense of humour
So they added all the extra rumours
Turning me into a nut case of a woman
Oh god! Just like you
I'm only Human!
Life to me
Is one big joke!


Comments about A Humourous Thought by suzan gumush

  • (1/26/2009 12:27:00 PM)

    I'm not sure that you needed the last line about life. Sometimes, the less
    said is better as an ending. I'm big on endings. Otherwise, this is a very good
    poem. Well worth reading. I totally recommend it.

    GW62
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  • (2/9/2007 4:59:00 PM)

    p.s. I wrote one I know you would like: 'Elizabethan Nightmare', in case you have not read it yet.

    best,
    alicia
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  • (2/9/2007 4:58:00 PM)

    Oh, this is funny! I especially liked your pivot shift here:

    I'll fight the position
    That I was pushed into

    (Those) enemies did come fast.

    More like this, please!
    best
    alicia
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  • (1/19/2007 2:13:00 PM)

    lots of humor in this one, very nice write, and well said (Report)Reply

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  • (11/26/2006 3:35:00 PM)

    'They couldn't connect to my sense of humour
    So they added all the extra rumours
    Turning me into a nut case of a woman'

    i really liked this line, the whole poem is alright but some lines pack more energy than others. hope u dont mind my honesty, then again i rarely like ppls poems anyway.
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  • Egal Bohen (11/24/2006 4:13:00 PM)

    Very good Suzan, I have met a fellow believer!
    Egal...
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  • (10/27/2006 6:23:00 AM)

    Life is one big Joke. We should laugh at it. Loved this one Suzan.

    Peace.
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  • (10/27/2006 6:21:00 AM)

    Life is one big Joke. We should laugh at it. Loved this one Suzan.

    Peace.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 17, 2011


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