A Heavenly Date Poem by Tareq Jalabi

A Heavenly Date

Rating: 4.6


virginity is a treasure
shouldn`t be given away
to someone that his love
in your heart wont stay
dont make love unless
its done the right way
because doing it
lose your love you may
wait for the moment
you find your soulmate
then go out with him
in a heavenly date
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stop not drinking wine
your feeling will be divine
then love making
will be more than fine
light some candles to create
a romantic atmosphere
let all your love
to him appear
listen to your heart
have no fear
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let him grab you
and with his love stab you
because its the ultimate excitment
when love goes through....
let your heart prevail
surrender to sin
if you back down now
it may never win
lay head on his shoulder
after you two dine
tell him in your soul
he has built a shrine
and whisper gently
please, always be mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Very lovely poem.

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Taryn Beals 15 March 2009

this is my favorite of all your poems..

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Miral El Nahry 10 January 2009

That was.. indescribably awesome! ! Great idea and amazing words

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foxy babii 06 January 2009

wow wow... its so good.. i wish that i had thought of something that good lol... it is most delightful to read. and a pleasure to poetry. wow wow wow

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Hailie Workman 28 December 2008

this is amazing! ive never heard of virginity put into this perspective. its great

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 22 November 2009

Wonderfully written! A clear vision of complete surrender! BUT... dear, do it please after the matrimonial vow! REGARDS...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2009

virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay dont make love unless its done the right way because doing it lose your love you may wait for the moment you find your soulmate then go out with him in a heavenly date..........dear it is so lovely ppresentation..... easy to understand and very simple language..... why compromisoe virginity when not sure of honesty... oh, so nicely worded poem.....10 read mine browneyes and two bright eyes too....

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Sifa Lombahe 17 September 2009

like i so agree to keep your self for someone who love you must don't just throw it all away like that

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What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

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What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

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