A Helpless Heart Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A Helpless Heart

Rating: 3.2


I say hi to everybody
When I start to depart!
It is when my sunflower
Kindly Tears me apart
My kindness is helpless
I have a helpless heart

(2008/8/16)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jihad T 17 January 2009

i like poems which has nature i like the way u wrote it 10 for this

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Patricia Bankhead 19 September 2008

It's good to have a kind heart. Great write! Pat~

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Evaughn Gray 25 August 2008

short but very sweet and welcoming. it was a good poem i really liked this one! ~Hazel G.E.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 August 2008

COOOOOOOOOOLLLL sathya narayana

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, aryaindia 19 August 2008

You have opened up your helpless heart and it shall never be helpless hereafter. arya

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'I say hi to everybody' Rachel Ann Butler

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anne adam 03 September 2009

i love it keep goin the good work

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Emma Adamyan 19 June 2009

I liked it A LOT. a simple poem with the deep meaning. im sure its all a good poem needs. bravo

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

short..indeed...infact your heart must be quite strong...cos my one is all fragile...i m like down and out...wonder wen it's gona crack...thank nighingale 10+++ regards

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

ur heart is not helpless.. it is amazing! the poem is too and the poet as well! excellent work my friend

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