A Kid's Oath! Poem by Shahzia Batool

A dedicated kid's promise.. :) a passionate kid :)

The kid who is still living in you is perhaps lost in the reminiscences of your long lost spring that quite hurriedly left you. Or else you are transporting yourself into the selves of many kids around you and are speaking for all of them. Also remember such kids want to live beyond this December and kindly don`t wish for their eternity or wait for their mere extinction.. This humility in a poet like has to be accoladed with all deserving praise. Long live overgrown poet prodigy Shahzia.

Nice poem... Sweet and innocent just like a child... =D Aditi

a light-hearted read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A lovely poem that lightens the heart. Could serve as a guide for children. Good job.

A lovely innocent dream /oath having no blemish or scar..... very nice

I search that kid where she is lost.

When Papa says, 'you'll have to work', I keep on studying books... When Mamma says, 'it's time for rest' I pass her grateful looks... haha, , these lines remind me of my childhood, , , ,

Very pleasant, optimistic and delightful read dear Ms. Shahzia Batool Ji. I loved the way you have expressed your childhood experiences!

excellent write Shahzia offering hope for the future. nice