Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

** A Life ** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Your hidden jellylike fleshes irritate
My little warm brother
Embracing your inner organisms
Authenticating the friendliness
Adorable of pinky madness
Stumbled upon the insertion
Lava flowing with enriched
Armageddon of nutritious juices
Like driving down
The alley of Mount Everest
The reason why mankind
Existence is penultimate
We cannot erase
The pleasure
A life


Comments about ** A Life ** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Exasperation (12/26/2019 11:22:00 PM)

    Now absolute diabolical insolence, you are......preternaturally good. (Report)Reply

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  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (9/2/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    Well, the title caught my attention and the poem is simply beautiful. Well done (Report)Reply

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  • Nikunj Sharma (8/10/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    life is one, pleasures are many, including the ones mentioned here..........read my poem called MAGNETS (Report)Reply

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  • Obed Souza (7/15/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    Life is self-breeding! It has always umpredictable ways to show us the wonders of love.
    Lovely poem!
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  • Broken Heart (7/13/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    very nyc poem! ! keep it up! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Kristina B; Williams (7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM)

    no words needed to describe this 1..10s again for #6....see i told you i will pay you back for the favor which is no favor at all..need the comment n the votes..im lacking (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    'We cannot erase
    The pleasure
    A life'

    Marvelous short poem on life.
    Last lines are amazing.
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  • Lady Grace (6/14/2009 6:11:00 PM)

    we can't erase the pleasure in life..nice expression..congrats for this top marks..grace (Report)Reply

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (6/13/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    '...'We cannot erase, The pleasure, A life..' So true. Including the pain too.
    Cheers.
    Subroto
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  • Riquetta Elliott (2/13/2009 10:35:00 AM)

    This very excellent Mr. Yusof descibinh about life. Great job. (Report)Reply

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  • Christine Kerr (2/8/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Wow, I never knew that the act could be explained so well. Thankyou (Report)Reply

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  • Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) (2/4/2009 1:18:00 AM)

    this is AMAZING! ! ! ! u left me speechless....... very great write (Report)Reply

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  • Swami Jeevan Ekin (2/4/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    That apple tree would have said the same words to 'ADAAM' (Report)Reply

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  • Carol Rhodes (1/27/2009 8:24:00 PM)

    Dear Master of the human body, mind and emotional system, and Master of the intricate workings of the passionate procreative forces and human connective explosions, you've done it again. This time with fewer words but with what seemed like a magnitude of sensuously subtle metaphors which taunted the brain and stimulated the 'electrical' system. Hmmmmmm, you are so clever and styled what could have been a raunchy punch into a work of art. You, the Master, poet supreme, tickeled us with class. Thank you! Carol (Report)Reply

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  • Michelle MelodyMichelle Melody (1/10/2009 6:39:00 PM)

    A few moments of pleasure resulting in life, very good. (Report)Reply

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  • Larry Bulot (1/1/2009 5:08:00 AM)

    Oh ya! Where is my woman! ! Brilliant wording! ! ! Very nice (Report)Reply

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  • Amy Douglass (Fifita) (12/28/2008 10:31:00 PM)

    I like it. It gives me a nice fuzzy feeling of hope and yet i don't know why. Awesome poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (11/16/2008 2:09:00 PM)

    I like the words, adorable of pinky madness. keep writing! (Report)Reply

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  • Carol Fletcher (10/16/2008 11:24:00 PM)

    So seductive and sensuous! TOO HOT! (Report)Reply

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  • Maxislam Beauty (10/14/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    this is awesome, man is lovely with poetry and existence. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 21, 2008


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