** A Life ** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

** A Life **

Rating: 4.0

Your hidden jellylike fleshes irritate
My little warm brother
Embracing your inner organisms
Authenticating the friendliness
Adorable of pinky madness
Stumbled upon the insertion
Lava flowing with enriched
Armageddon of nutritious juices
Like driving down
The alley of Mount Everest
The reason why mankind
Existence is penultimate
We cannot erase
The pleasure
A life

Michelle Melody 10 January 2009

A few moments of pleasure resulting in life, very good.

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Carol Rhodes 27 January 2009

Dear Master of the human body, mind and emotional system, and Master of the intricate workings of the passionate procreative forces and human connective explosions, you've done it again. This time with fewer words but with what seemed like a magnitude of sensuously subtle metaphors which taunted the brain and stimulated the 'electrical' system. Hmmmmmm, you are so clever and styled what could have been a raunchy punch into a work of art. You, the Master, poet supreme, tickeled us with class. Thank you! Carol

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Swami Jeevan Ekin 04 February 2009

That apple tree would have said the same words to 'ADAAM'

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 04 February 2009

this is AMAZING! ! ! ! u left me speechless....... very great write

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Christine Kerr 08 February 2009

Wow, I never knew that the act could be explained so well. Thankyou

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Exasperation 26 December 2019

Now absolute diabolical insolence, you are......preternaturally good.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 September 2009

Well, the title caught my attention and the poem is simply beautiful. Well done

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

life is one, pleasures are many, including the ones mentioned here..........read my poem called MAGNETS

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

Life is self-breeding! It has always umpredictable ways to show us the wonders of love. Lovely poem!

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Broken Heart 13 July 2009

very nyc poem! ! keep it up! !

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