Jazlle D. H.

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A Love Song - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

Come climb the sleeping mountain my darling,
Come stray through the guarding trees with me;
For I long for the nature’s solemn song
And the singing birds of the green forest.

Come watch the waving leaves my beloved,
Come hear the enchanting music they make;
As they softly swing with the gentle wind
Like the singing birds dancing in the air.

Come walk to the mountain’s peak my darling,
Come envision the halcyon place with me;
Beneath the moonlight we'll make our haven
Like the singing birds nestle in the tree.

Come lie down and look at the sparkling sky,
Come cuddle me with your sweet promises;
Till my last breath I’ll hold on to your love
With the singing birds in the green forest.

27th August 2008

Comments about A Love Song by Jazlle D. H.

  • (1/14/2010 7:25:00 AM)

    it's simply beautifull. please keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • (7/20/2009 9:26:00 AM)

    Lovely poem!
    Nice reading.
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  • (7/6/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    A loving invite to that special person with very interesting choice of words. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    its rich and melodious but more then song ebven and what you expressed here is meaningful..multiple meanings are coming out from it.. the combination of words is enough catchy, heart feeling and impressive.. what i like in this poem is a promtion of struggle and courage... liked it.. and you deserve to be called good poetess of children and young generation as well.. pray for your long and happy life..just go on..future is yours...10++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2009 11:58:00 PM)

    This is a very well expressed, written, and beguiling love poem, Jazlle. I liked your phrasing in it very much, as well as your use of singing birds as a metaphor for love that repeated in the final line of each verse. It's quite an accomplished write!
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  • (1/5/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful.
    Lucky he who is allowed to wander through the guarding trees and explore.
    Your words express such velvety softness while the sing the sirens' song.
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  • (1/1/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Jazlle I really admired the way you used the theme of birds to tell your love song. It was beautifully romantic with lovely imagery as well. Well done. Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • (9/6/2008 12:25:00 AM)

    good love song this...the last stanza lines are temptingly inviting...ten for you, Joan (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/5/2008 5:13:00 AM)

    Ammmmmmazing illustrations indeed! (Report) Reply

  • (9/3/2008 2:47:00 AM)

    i know chocolate helps everyone to create; you proves it (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    Nice invite, with beautiful evocative imagery that suggest Divine inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    amazing love song..i feel like swinging in the hammock..with caress of lovely
    fairies, singing..very nice...

    Best Regards,
    Ency Bearis
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  • (8/31/2008 5:55:00 PM)

    i like this poem very much Joan.According to your explanations i don't know where you get it.You must have a very strong feeling or imagination for love and understanding.A kind of very kind psychology you don't know you just have.However you do it you do it! kiss.Chris. (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (8/31/2008 3:51:00 AM)

    so beautiful thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 31, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 3, 2008

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