Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night,
The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight.
To thank the moon for her fan-like listening, her generous free flight,
The notes dance on the black sleepy ocean, make it excited and silver white.
(You may find the website for this song by the writer on the poet's page or search on the internet)
what celestial merry-making! it's an allegory with sensuousness! a feast for imagination! but naturally one is tempted to ask...why this four line composition? ? ?
Please read my poem QUASI-QUATRAIN for the answer of the question below.
Beautiful poem! Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night, The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight. Wonderful creation, and beautifully described setting!
the words surely glide through the miles in tranquil beauty......
A wondrous love poem with nature's magical gifts presented with d poet's pen.
you are so good especially when you write about the moon
The poem was like a shallow then deep shore line..Wanderous. A soul's craddle.
The poem felt so good to feel, and the title, i loved it! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow a beautiful little story, loving image of dancing notes and silver white ocean, thank you!