A Lucky Escape Poem by Hazel Durham

A Lucky Escape

Rating: 5.0
 


Love is her wish with his breathtaking kiss,
He plunder's her soul with his delectable charm,
Warming up her heart, unravelling her dormant desire's,
Puzzling her questioning mind,
'Why me? '
Is she worthy of his sincere interest,
As she always feel's like a second rate date,
With her twisted soul that sow's a seed of self hate,
Even with her loving nature,
She find's a rotten apple too endure,
Discoloured and bruised,
From a past that flung mud at her so fast,
Leaving her with a complex like a faulty flex.



Tears of ever present resentment at her torment
With her brave inner roar of a lion and a lamb's bleat,
He cherished her broken and battered emotions,
Spiralling devotion as she has a terrible notion,
Destroy anything good is the devils potion,
With her feeling's far from level
Killing his love with her inner thunder,
That tear's him assunder,
Losing him is the hardest kick,
It leave's her floored,
She is the only one he ever adored,
Is it a mirage or a trick of light,
That he see's her as a ravishing sight.



She knows he has had a lucky escape,
As hell is striking her fragile mind,
She is far from well,
Clinging onto the dream of explaining to him,
Her stumbling destruction over her raw emotions,
Her real fear she will never get over his beautiful soul,
Wishing to get healed so that finally their love will be sealed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.benjamin Abate 30 August 2013

Very nice. It's relatable and I like the flow of your poem.

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Kanav Justa 09 November 2013

... that was extraordinary.... such a deep meaning it had... really loved it

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Soulful Heart 18 February 2014

The disquiet of our own insecurities indeed have a way to ddestriy the beauty of moments pure..... so well expressed...todays world of non trust.....

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V P Mahur 27 February 2014

its really lucky to have a true love that can save our soul. emotional read. Nice one.

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Yash Shinde 24 March 2014

.....a deep exploration of human emotions and philosophy, its a beautiful piece having elements of nature, psyche, and beauty...great wrk dear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2019

She knows he has had a lucky escape, As is striking her fragile mind, She is far from well, Clinging onto the dream of explaining to him, Her stumbling destruction over her raw emotions, Her real fear she will never get over his beautiful soul, Wishing to get healed so that finally their love will be sealed........so moving. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 October 2014

Human sentiments are a mystery and shall remain a mystery. It's a nice poem expressing emotions that touch the hearts..........10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

Outstanding piece loaded with so many feelings of love, beauty, psyche......extraordinary skills of writing.......

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Achill Lad 12 October 2014

This poem tugs at my heart's strings. Why? Because I knew that lady. Low self esteem is so destructive, so prevalent among women who live in a male dominated society. Such a shame. He loved her for who she was, not for who she wanted to be. I fully understand your message here, Hazel, and the underlying cause. This is a great poem but only touches the surface. Thanks.

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Sir Hosseyn Sabbaghi 27 March 2014

Very nice. I like it...

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