A Magical Season Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
A Magical Season
I saw blue sky over a blue sky
Mountains flying with clouds
Million stars sparking on earth
And trees running by my side
While I was singing in silence
I saw a sun kissing a sun
Ocean playing with the birds
Million fishes dancing in air
And sand grains walking along
While I was writing in breeze
I saw a moon gazing a moon
Night fighting with a light
Hot fire talking with cold snow
And rainbow painting with me
While I was swimming in salt
truly magical with the figurative languages you used like an oxymorons...fire/ice...coldness and love or hatred and platonic state....lovely poem
wonderful visual metaphors I saw a sun kissing a sun Ocean playing with the birds Million fishes dancing in air And sand grains walking along wonderful descriptive poem 10/10
Solitude is the common factor I find in the three stanzas...a free surrealistic thinking....interesting
The surrealism in the poem is very good. But it should have been connected to some realistic thing in the end to give the poem more flavour.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
12/6/2025 11:07:23 PM # 1.0.0
A magical poem in a magical season keeps the reader entralled++++10 regards