each and everyone has some desire
these desires are endless.
the desire of love-power,
raised him high, very high.
the desire of indifference-power
ragged him down
beyond his imagination.
the desire of thought-power
killed his inner silence.
the desire of money-power
fooled him, his life, his all.
the desire of education-power
made him the best
that's why a man's desire in life
made him to see the world beyond.
Within just 15 minutes...a great idea beautifully came out..! Wonderful...great job! !
Hi. I believe the one who knows best becomes silent. Shallow water makes more noise. So thought power won't break the silence. I think it's a good poem. I like the powers that you mentioned and I like the last stanza the most. I'd be glad if you comment on my poems too. Thanks.
i like the ending part the most, the consequence is great and fine. nice poem.
Wow a wonderful flow of words from your pen. Ending is beautiful...Loved reading it.
well done................................anjana, , , its actually a nice poem..written in just 15 min. i also onvote u to read mine..[specially hindi]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I made a small mistake to forget her after 10 years desires still lingers beyond her foot when she smiled me kept scilent when she laughed me put mask when she admired me roared barring the limit now after a long period she disguise in my every walk no, nothing powered me but no desire ruled me