A Meteor, Right? (Science Poem?) Poem by Chuck Audette

A Meteor, Right? (Science Poem?)

Rating: 5.0


if you look up at the sky's dark shore
and see the flash of a meteor,
and instead of fading, it seems more bright
you might soon be dead from a meteorite!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 22 October 2009

Science huh? LOL. I love the verses that your verses are the inspiration of.

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Shirley Woods 27 July 2009

Hi Chuck, Love your stuff - you obviously have a great sense of humour - my 16 year old son is a fan!

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Beth L Adams 21 December 2007

Cute, Chuck! I won't be viewing any stars for a long time; you never know. Well done with excellent wit as always! Christmas wishes, Beth

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Tom J. Mariani 05 November 2007

On 11-03 I wrote 'Like Shooting Stars.' Today I read this by you. Are we psychic, psycho or what. You don't have to hit me in the head before I see the light.

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Esther Leclerc 04 November 2007

My knees hurt from slapping them............ : ]! ! ! Est

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 06 January 2016

Good! ! ! I love science poems. Check out some of mine on my poem list!

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Smoky Hoss 02 October 2012

It takes a sharp mind to imagine such a sight! Great one!

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Danny Draper 14 July 2012

Very funny, great stuff. My good Sir, you underestimate me as one smart fella Because I have a good umbrella.

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Shadow Girl 13 May 2011

Comic genius! LOVE it! I've got to read some more of your work! Glad i started on this one - hilarious!

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Gone Away 04 March 2010

You are making me laugh! although I believe death by meteor is no laughing matter!

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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