A Modern Love Story Poem by Susan Williams
A Modern Love Story
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She eats apples. He eats bread.
This makes his face grow red.
She eats bread. He eats bread.
Even this makes his face grow red.
She once was a happy girl. He was once a happy boy.
Let's sacrifice the bull, shall we?
She once was a happy girl. Happy he never was.
Now she is a parrot nodding her head
Hopefully in time before his face grows red.
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~~~~~~~~~~© 2020 susan williams
A Modern Love Story is the real title- PH wanted to jam the words together and while changing it in some places, it refuses to change it here. But then again, some day I will return to it and they will have restored its original title. Sigh.
They finally fixed the title- -but now I look silly for complaining about a corrected title. Really and truly fir a while it read Amodernlovestory! ! !
This one goes straight to myfavourites! I see the red as jealousy...unfounded, but present. It's destroying even the simplest of activities in this couple's life. I suspect even the parrot will not be enough to make it subside. Brilliant, Susan, and a perfect 10!
Anjandev- - you obviously understood! ! ! That makes me happy cuz some didn't! ! !
Hopefully in time before his face grows red..........magnificent..........thank u.....anjandev roy.
Bernard, you have said the truth. Thank you for that starry-eyed 10! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 11:35:35 PM # 1.0.0
She once was a happy girl. Happy he never was. Now she is a parrot nodding her head Hopefully in time before his face grows red.
Thank you for pointing out the lines you responded to!