a lovely new life
a lovely new beginning
a lovely new flower
a lovely new face there
no trace of sadness there
every new morn..
without a trace of any old mourn
a lovely new life...
i want it to be mine effortlessly
iam truely exhausted..
with the relations around
there is realy no bond
iam realy disgusted
with everybody's disguise
they realy don't have a face
a truth unfolds itelf from your short lines. i agree. new is fresh. shan
Peot seems fed up with the relations and morns in the day to day life Good aspire to have a lovely life' very nice sir +++++10 Sandhya
a very nice rhyme, words are greatly penned.Thanks for sharing
The word personality is derived from word persona(means mask) . I think we all wear mask.................. Good write......
Day to day life's inevitable dejections..........pains, ennui of hackneyed life.....very well written
I like the thought behind this poem, well written by you 10 Lynda xx
life sometimes could be boring and exasperating. We get on every morning with our wishes for a better day.
an interesting write..circular in nature...realism and fantasy..so well merged
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A change to refresh and tired of old craps...meaningful write..