A New Face Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A New Face

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a lovely new life
a lovely new beginning
a lovely new flower
a lovely new face there
no trace of sadness there
every new morn..
without a trace of any old mourn
a lovely new life...
i want it to be mine effortlessly
iam truely exhausted..
with the relations around
there is realy no bond
iam realy disgusted
with everybody's disguise
they realy don't have a face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 20 February 2009

A change to refresh and tired of old craps...meaningful write..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 February 2009

a truth unfolds itelf from your short lines. i agree. new is fresh. shan

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Sandhya S N 19 February 2009

Peot seems fed up with the relations and morns in the day to day life Good aspire to have a lovely life' very nice sir +++++10 Sandhya

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Meggie Gultiano 18 February 2009

a very nice rhyme, words are greatly penned.Thanks for sharing

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 February 2009

Beautiful and excelled...good work

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 February 2009

The word personality is derived from word persona(means mask) . I think we all wear mask.................. Good write......

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 February 2009

Day to day life's inevitable dejections..........pains, ennui of hackneyed life.....very well written

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

I like the thought behind this poem, well written by you 10 Lynda xx

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Eddie Roa 22 February 2009

life sometimes could be boring and exasperating. We get on every morning with our wishes for a better day.

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Chitra - 20 February 2009

an interesting write..circular in nature...realism and fantasy..so well merged

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