A New Journey... Poem by Mamta Agarwal

A New Journey...

Rating: 5.0


As the youngest spread
Wings in the literal sense
And waved both hands
After clearing the security check,

We both waved back and sighed
And evaded looking in the other’s eyes.
Then I quietly slipped my hand
In his arm, and pushed my brand

New bag on wheels towards
The domestic departure lounge.
To catch our flight to Goa, the land
Of magic, beaches and sand.

To get reacquainted all over once again,
And a new journey of new possibilities began.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 01 September 2008

Life is a chain of new beginnings...

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Lava P 02 September 2008

This is nice poem............

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Sadiqullah Khan 03 September 2008

journey is among the few things i am deeply fascinated with, , , long travels, there is something spiritual in that, , , so well expressed here, , a sense of freedom 10

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Ency Bearis 03 September 2008

a journey to new beginning..well versed..great write... Ency Bearis

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Chitra - 03 September 2008

a whole new beginning captured perfectly in these fine stanzas

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 10 February 2012

hmm interesting. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Pushkar Bisht 14 September 2008

Life is a journey not a destination that's why every stage of life we should spend merrily not with tears. Good piece of work

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2008

Very touching. Strength for your new journey, my friend. And many blessings. Kind regards, Sandra

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premji premji 08 September 2008

Life: A journey from loneliness Through loneliness To loneliness... This is the sublime reality... Dear Mamtaji Everything is periferal Except pain... You told it with wonderful lines Piecrcing heart and soul *10*

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David Harris 06 September 2008

Mamta, the opening lines on the first stanza embrace you to read on. A beautiful poem from a masterly pen. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David

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