# # A Passing Cloud Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

very meaningful composition............

I had to read this five times, but I finally understand....... This is straight up motivational. This should be made into a short movie where as the shadow of the cloud is going by, the world is gaining color and the hungry have food, and what have you. Just so great that I'm actually sitting here looking at the world through this poem. 10/10!

good poem and nice meaning 10+++

Yah! so sweet and wonderful to say..... Amen of everything....all is just a passing cloud... ' a reality '...to live. then, why cease the wind thank you dear friend...God bless you....a 10 +++

Yes, nothing will be same. Well scripted poem.

Nothing will be the same. That is the beauty of life.

Dear Samanyan, Thanks for your invite. You have all the ingredients, right from boiling milk in an Indian kitchen and passing clouds leaving shadows over the villages and you made good use of the imageries to drive home your points to the readers. A nice read. Rated highly. I have one clitch on your last line. Abruptly, you closed the poem by saying 'THANK GOD'. Instead, I feel, you could have finished with- ' that nothing will be the same in Your creation'-choice, of course, is yours. Rajkumar

Dear Samanyan, Thanks for your invite. G

An excellent piece with some wonderful imagery.

A tribute to the kitchen-bound life....or life-bound kitchen....thanks on behalf of ever my kitchen and its ever ambrosial smell