A Patch Of Green Poem by Hazel Durham

A Patch Of Green

Rating: 5.0


I own a patch of green where flowers and trees grows as birds sing,
A patch of peace and tranquility that brings
Your dawn light eyes that sings
To me, with nature's gift to bring
To my tear filled eyes,
I flounder even on firm ground but I need wings
To fly into your dawn light eyes
And to realize my past is not relevant,
You send me a love letter of your vigorous talk that is sent
To my limited confidence that is lent
For a while, a moment then vanishes as i hide in my barren tent
Of broken ambitions and desires,
Then you touch my heart and I fly from my tent
To skies so high as I feel free in your dawn light eyes,
We fly in a broken and beautiful blue tinged sky,
To our planet of love's tender passion,
We land on our patch of green where flowers and trees grows as birds sing
With a conviction of truth unraveled in the dawn light of your eyes
You are my wise and loving King.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shimizu Mizuhala 20 July 2017

Nature, life, love, all in this poem. Very exciting and benefit. Thank you!

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Bharati Nayak 20 July 2017

I own a patch of green where flowers and trees grows as birds sing, A patch of peace and tranquility that brings Your dawn light eyes that sings To me, with nature's gift to bring To my tear filled eyes, - - - - - - - Love is a patch of green we keep in the chamber of our heart.It is the most beautiful feeling that fills us with, peace, confidence and bliss.A very lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 20 July 2017

dawn light eyes, - - - -and around that beautiful expression you weave a magic poem, my dear. patch of green - -patch of peace - - - - - - - - - - - - - oh yes, a simple but effective link up that gives a place and a feeling on which to stand while you weave your spell I flounder even on firm ground but I need wings To fly into your dawn light eyes And to realize my past is not relevant, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - you could not have said this better- it is perfect and it gives us hope. Thank you for a great poem of faith. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2017

Euphemistically inscribed. It may be quoted.. ..To our planet of love's tender passion, We land on our patch of green where flowers and trees grows as birds sing With a conviction of truth unraveled in the dawn light of your eyes. Lovely poem on love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Muzahidul Reza 21 July 2017

I own a patch of green where flowers and trees grows as birds sing, , , , , , , , , , , , , , then in practical you are lucky, ............ great starting and excellently written poem, thank you for sharing the poem with us, 10

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A patch of green in the desert of life- what more can we ask for! Well done!

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Love leaps off every line is this beautiful work that is full of feeling!

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alan brown 12 May 2018

I love your patch of greenHazel.Alan big 10

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Unwritten Soul 17 August 2017

Past is not relevant? but it is valid to show how strong you are to face harsh things overall..if there is certificate to award you how great you can endure hardest time you ever face, this will be relevant one, but thats it, you get that certificate already now you deserve happiness no more hardship...and for sure you will be happy, i wish you be one with your beloved ones...A patch of green will cover whole deserted area to be fully green, soon be colourful :)

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Valsa George 22 July 2017

Around the patch of green, your dreams circle! You hope to find bliss and happiness in the loving company of the one with 'dawn light eyes'! Beautiful write as ever with a mix of joy and sorrow! A sure 10

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