A New Dawn (Sequel To 'Across The Wide Expanse') Poem by Hazel Durham

A New Dawn (Sequel To 'Across The Wide Expanse')

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Across this wide expanse
Of your parched emotional landscapes,
You have drawn your drapes,
Across your troubled waters that run so deep,

I feel now is a time to weep,
At your broken spirit,
That is unable to leap,
Across the margins of destruction,

Try and feel my love soaking into your barren heart,
My life is loving you until death do us part,
You take my gift of kindness,
To help you survive through bankruptcy,

You stare into an unknown space,
Your brown searching eyes are now sunken
Into your creased and gaunt face,
I light the candle of hope,

Allowing you to adjust at your own pace,
I feel such tenderness towards your drowning soul,
I imagine we will survive our tears,
And march hand in hand so bold,

Against the wars of time,
Winning each others hearts as we grow old,
With peace, love and respect as we join the fold,
Your pain is now mine to ease and heal,

Your brown eyes slowly begin to search for my response,
I smile from my deep desire to hold you in my arms,
As your words begin to charm
Me into feeling we have discovered solid ground,

Peace, harmony and love is around
Like a new dawn is found,
Our favourite song is playing, the beautiful sound,
Fills our eyes with wonder and love,

Like flying across this wide expanse
Hearing angels singing from above.

Thursday, February 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 13 February 2015

As in...The Wide Expanse, we must remember that Life is funny....Please Light the candle of hope...... and money doesn't make the world go round it only makes the ride nicer.... Join hands Hazel to climb this mountain. You will get to the top. x

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

Peace, harmony and love is around Like a new dawn is found, Our favourite song is playing, the beautiful sound, Fills our eyes with wonder and love, Like flying across this wide expanse Hearing angels singing from above. A great message through a beautiful poem........................10

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

After a break up, it is now time to reunite! A new dawn awaits and a warm invitation is extended! If a life of togetherness is built on the solid ground of love, peace and harmony, you can fly across the wide expanse, listening to the song of angels! A poem overflowing with warm feelings and deep emotions! Enjoyed much!

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Dave Walker 15 February 2015

A great follow up poem, love goes through many emotions.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 February 2015

Against the wars of time, Winning each others hearts as we grow old, With peace, love and respect as we join the fold, Your pain is now mine to ease and heal, ......I like these lines, Deep feeling and expression found in this poem. Broovy composition.

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Relational resurrection is indeed possible through the power of love. Well worded my friend!

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Stephen Katona 16 March 2015

Powerful expression and emotion. A great poem for a supportive partner to read to their loved one when they are feeling low - their soul 'drowning'. |

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Ramesh Rai 16 March 2015

What a beautiful heart winning poem. Your pain is now mine to ease and heal Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2015

After reading the previous poem, I conclude that this is an happy-ending love story; when the couple have survived the storms of life, and ultimately, embracing the beauty of love. Very emotional and touchy...Loved it!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 23 February 2015

At your broken sprit that is unable to leap. Very wonderfully presented master piece of poem. Nice one really.

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