A Perfect Girl.... Poem by Fatima Obaid

A Perfect Girl....

Rating: 4.3


The one who was composed of Love and clothed in the dress of truth, Who was cognizant of world's affairs, She was careless about world but Cautious of her mistakes, Her conductive was only the God's will, Who did mistakes and learned from them, Who was congenial and pleasant to everyone, Who was conspicuous for her honesty, Her life was adorned with the God's blessings and happy with His exams, For whom God's love was enough to live, Her heart was replete with God's love, Whose conscience was her best friend, Who was zealous for getting knowledge from others, She was acquitted from all bounds, The Girl i met was a Perfect One..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its all about the qualities of a perfect girl in my views :) Those girls who have such attributes are called as ***Perfect One***
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Sounds like a very young girl, innocent, pure and attempting to do what is right in her young life. Very good, an ideal to be cherished, treasured and propagated throughout life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2014

Sounds like Mother Teresa in the making. I like it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 January 2014

An inspiring writing! We shud all strive for perfection. Take care fatima.

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Awara Panchhi 10 January 2014

Bohat Hi Achhi Poem Hai.

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Marvin Brato 31 December 2013

The love ones we adore appears perfect in our eyes even she is imperfect as a person....love is blind!

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