Her eyes flicker once,
No perfect structure,
flickers twice,
vision blurry and obscure,
Her eyes keep searching,
tiresome, red, closing...............slowly,
Forced open, venturing
from pair to pair,
dizzy, crossed, seperated........abruptly,
No sense found,
stuck, glued on to oblivion,
No clear foresight,
hasty to find out the exact reason,
fragmented purposes,
No Vacancy!
unfasten shields,
gradually breaking free...
Clasped once again into horrid nuisance,
Quickly absconding from sweet acceptance,
Left alone to feel lonely,
Slowly breaking into insanity,
Slowly..............Surely...............Exactly...............
Lost.......................... Failed to prevail................
Tainted heart, drowned in lies...........................
Slowly....... Dying........ Slowly..... UNVEILED.....
Next day,
Found dead,
No true reason,
For suicidal nonsense,
Sweet Intoxication,
No pulse rate,
No Beat,
And no one.....
I MEAN NO ONE...
Came to the day when:
Body was poured with soil,
Soul was set free to the heavens,
Body underneath grassy fields....
Atop the lifeless body a gravestone...
R usted
I nsoluble
P urpose
of the lifeless soul,
Died for no reason....
For she thought she had no reason....
to live....
:)
Hey..Why did the themes of your poems suddenly change? Either way they're still good.But why change it? ..You're good..Really good..
Died for no reason.... For she thought she had no reason....not good step at all she should have faced the consequaences... very good write....10 read mone... never say die////when feet start crumbling.....innocence regained
How she failed to face her problem squarely, and took the wrong way out, suicide. Emotional to read.
Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless
Wow quite a perfect poem too Natasha.I'm very impressed.Keep up the good work!
ok, nash.. don't attemp suicide... haha... joke... a very very well made poem... different... keep it up...
A person ending her life for she thought she has no reason... If ever you feel you don't see your reason don't kill your self ok... joke.. hahaha.. well done... keep on rocking..
Excellent poem, Natasha..thank you for sharing....be blessed................10+++++
Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so beautiful. this piece has its own mind spoken. this is so nice! ! !