A Place In Time Poem by Jayne Louise Davies
A Place In Time
I've walked the mountains far and wide,
It's beauty holds tranquility,
Back then my family by my side,
Those memories mean the world to me.
The sunshine on a Sunday morn,
The butterflies that gaily danced,
Around the flowers everywhere,
that touched my heart at every glance.
Those mountains hold a special key,
That opens memories every day,
A special time,
The place for me,
A place in time along life's way.
Jayne Louise Davies
Your last stanza is my favorite! I gave 4 stars **** for A Place In Time. I suppose I have several 'places' in MY time as well, e.g. the 'penny candy store' across from my elementary school when I was in grades K-2, and McDonald's (for ice cream. bri : )
For consistency, I will assume that you, Jayne, wished to Capitalize 'that' in this line: 'that touched my heart at every glance.'
In these lines: 'I've walked the mountains far and wide, It's beauty holds tranquility, ' I SUGGEST 'their' rather than 'It's' and 'It's' should be 'Its', of course. : ) bri
And you express them so beautifully you capture the readers heart! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
Breathtakingly beautiful! .. How precious and meaningful those memories are! ..
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This is simply wonderful.