M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,800 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

A Puzzle Unsolved! ! - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I see Your signs
Yet I know not how
You look like
I have seen birds
Flying high
against the gravity
On wings of trust and faith
I see Animals walking tall
With and without legs
Some crawling on stomach
Some with many legs
Nature changing colors
Sea with calm waves
making noise near shore
Mountain standing tall, motionless
Sand in desert like pearls in ocean
Tangerine sun becoming fired brick
Bowing down making way for silver moon
Wind flowing in all direction
Clouds thick and thin
Signs day after night
Yet I know not how YOU look like?
YOU created this world with some purpose
I know not.
YOU gave name, fame and money
To some and humiliation to some
I know not what point to prove?
Is it a test or pleasure?
YOU have angles to obey YOU
YOU have unseen powers
Yet you give some to humans
I know not for what?
They misuse it, You allow them to
And I know not.
I believe in YOU, Your books, Your Messengers
And everything you sent to us as Your mercy.

Topic(s) of this poem: god

Form: Free Verse


Comments about A Puzzle Unsolved! ! by M. Asim Nehal

  • (1/6/2016 12:56:00 PM)


    Brilliant poem..............10+++++ (Report) Reply

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  • (10/31/2015 1:29:00 PM)


    X c llent poem Asim ....... (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 5:39:00 AM)


    Verrily, you admiration and quest is deserving as a weak human being and
    as a poet with deep thought and imagination.
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  • Valsa George (10/30/2015 3:42:00 AM)


    We have limitations in understanding the purpose and motive behind God's creation! What we can do is to believe in what he speaks through holy scriptures, through his messengers and what ever he sends from above! Enjoyed the poem avowing your absolute surrender to God and his supremacy! (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (10/29/2015 1:22:00 PM)


    And ten points also, I like. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/29/2015 11:07:00 AM)


    Very interesting sharing poem shared here with wise view.Some crawling on stomach...Some with many legs...Nature has given us wonderful perceptions. Wise sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (10/29/2015 11:06:00 AM)


    Being in wonder and amazed at the beautiful creations and the purpose of the great Creator.Nice spiritual poem.- - - - - - - 10 (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/29/2015 10:55:00 AM)


    What a beautiful poem! ! Love every line of it.10+ (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2015 10:54:00 AM)


    for us is not to ask but to obey
    obstacles on the way are to test our faith
    a great write Asim.- 19+++
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/28/2016 2:19:00 PM)

    Thanks for your appreciation Loke.

  • (10/29/2015 10:47:00 AM)


    Beautiful prayer offered to the Creator praising Him with motley imaginations and accepting His supremacy. Thanks for sharing.10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015



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