# # A Query - Haiku Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # A Query - Haiku

Rating: 5.0


an astonished bee
asks flower 'why you wither'
'well that is my growth'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 08 July 2009

I never know what is haiku or senru.........i like the way yu answered the question and the flow of write...........

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Catrina Heart 07 July 2009

sad to know that many of us are not lucky to have a verdant mound birth right or a silver spoon and golden slippers from birth to decaying ground....lovely haiku! ! !

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Bob Blackwell 07 July 2009

A very good Haiku of lifes cycle.

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Sandra Martyres 06 July 2009

A flowery explanation of nature...nice write

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Louis Rams 04 July 2009

very good answer. a ten

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Smiley Hooker 15 July 2009

Your chosen words brilliantly explained the cycle of life. very well written! : -)

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Joseph Poewhit 11 July 2009

Few words with much wisdom.

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Raj Arumugam 10 July 2009

brilliant! Inspired! Glowing verse!

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 July 2009

i love your thoughts on this... very true.... we have to wither to know we really grew... talks on the mystery and reality of life... that we all bound to wither.... thanks for your sharing your wisdom 10+++ maia

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C. P. Sharma 10 July 2009

I liked it. I loved it. CP

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