an astonished bee
asks flower 'why you wither'
'well that is my growth'
sad to know that many of us are not lucky to have a verdant mound birth right or a silver spoon and golden slippers from birth to decaying ground....lovely haiku! ! !
Your chosen words brilliantly explained the cycle of life. very well written! : -)
i love your thoughts on this... very true.... we have to wither to know we really grew... talks on the mystery and reality of life... that we all bound to wither.... thanks for your sharing your wisdom 10+++ maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I never know what is haiku or senru.........i like the way yu answered the question and the flow of write...........