A River Flows Poem by Rob Lamberton

A River Flows

Rating: 5.0


Flood me with your love
Without the river of life I would wither
Flood me for I am dry
I am withered
My words are like a dry and withered leaf
Only my stem is green
Water me
Produce leaves of green
Bring healing to the dry places
To the desert woman

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 20 January 2023

Love heals all wound. A magical compassionate heart can do the magic of reviving a withering heart. Beautiful poem.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 23 January 2023

May new attractive green words sprout on your poem stem

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2023

Lovely plea! Don't we all need it? You have spoken for us all. Bravo!

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Rob Lamberton 22 January 2023

You are very gracious Nosheen! Thank you!

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 January 2023

Like river, love is life sustaining....well depicted one... Congrats!

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Nabakishore Dash 21 January 2023

Extremely nice words for the river water which keeps our lives run.

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Susan Williams 21 January 2023

this poem reveals the magic of a line repeated! ! ! great use of a poetic tool

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